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I bid you a due
And a due i must pay
Through sorrow and misery
Goodbye i must say
Through anguish and agony
Through pain un-deceased
I follow the voices
In which I'm impeached
I know that he loves me
Even in the dark
In which i was trapped
A rage that would spark
An evil within me
Of which you can't compare
No matter what you say
Or you think or you swear
It's hiding inside me
And you'll just judge and stare

So as i said before
I bid you a due
And a due I must pay
Through chaos and misery
Goodbye i must say

        ~Talim
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Youderped Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
i............
LOVE IT!
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Gothictalim Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2011
..? thanks xD
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iluvdeidara9975 Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
. . .beautiful. . .
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Gothictalim Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010
too many people 0___________0 but thx ^_^
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iluvdeidara9975 Featured By Owner Dec 22, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
LOL
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zombiesplice Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Student Writer
really nice
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Gothictalim Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010
thx :w00t:
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zombiesplice Featured By Owner Dec 21, 2010  Student Writer
np :)
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WinterRose-IcyThorns Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2010
No! You can't leave! You must stay and write more amazing poetry!!
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